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Post by Deleted on May 16, 2014 8:02:00 GMT -2
You´re better than me... jijiji...  Well... no I'm not. we're different writers with different styles That was nice of you ... it's true, we have different writing way, and I admit that I like the way in that you risk with the writing .. |
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Post by Deleted on May 16, 2014 8:04:43 GMT -2
Well... no I'm not. we're different writers with different styles That was nice of you ... it's true, we have different writing way, and I admit that I like the way in that you risk with the writing .. well this site allows me to be a little dirty. Lmao |
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Post by Deleted on May 16, 2014 8:11:06 GMT -2
That was nice of you ... it's true, we have different writing way, and I admit that I like the way in that you risk with the writing .. well this site allows me to be a little dirty. Lmao My poetry allows me to say many things I feel inside me, that otherwise I can not say, because sometime I´m unable to speak of certain things of my life. |
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Post by Deleted on May 16, 2014 8:14:26 GMT -2
well this site allows me to be a little dirty. Lmao My poetry allows me to say many things I feel inside me, that otherwise I can not say, because sometime I´m unable to speak of certain things of my life. Thats true. My poem is actually about Dylan not being ashamed of his figure. |
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Post by Deleted on May 16, 2014 8:18:18 GMT -2
My poetry allows me to say many things I feel inside me, that otherwise I can not say, because sometime I´m unable to speak of certain things of my life. Thats true. My poem is actually about Dylan not being ashamed of his figure. I know it and is memorable, you have done a great job.  |
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Post by Rikki Jo on May 17, 2014 15:03:49 GMT -2
Who I Am The hurt, the pain, all the darkness The lies, deceit & anxiety The anger, the humiliation & thoughts of suicide Have all brought me here. The resentment, the voilence The fear, the tears & isolation The selfishness, the mental breakdowns Have all brought me here The hospitalization, the therapy The support & love The healing & road to recovery Have all brought me here... The special person I am today. Nothing is more special than that. I can relate... Although I've suffered from mental trauma many times in the past, I've still managed to become a stronger person than I was before. And I've happened to eventually find the friendliest place I've ever been to.. I really appreciate you guys always taking me as I am. Now I know that I can always count on you guys when I'm having moments of weakness. You guys are always there for me, and have been a big inspiration to me as well. I'll always be there for you guys too. |
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Post by Rikki Jo on May 17, 2014 15:33:20 GMT -2
Sweet Pride You've been called scandalous Betrayed by a loved one Recieved praise and critisism. Well what do they know? What do they really know? Do they? Can they? No they don't. Though they should. We're told to be ashamed of such things. A sight as breathtaking as yourself has no reason to. Do they not appreciate beauty?! If they did, the world would be a better place. They know nothing. Nothing at all. You are an inspiration. A rolemodel to us all. You feel no shame. Love what you are. Proud and free. Free from the chains of society. Breaking the mold of what people expect you to be. That body. That beautiful body. A proud free body. You've had my respect already, now it's permanent. Teach me to be more proud. Teach me to accept myself. Please. I beg of you. Show me the way. Help me escape. Help me free myself. That smoothness. Those beauty marks. That errection. The way you grab yourself. If only I could have you. If only I could be like you. Wish all of us could be more like you.  Wow, what a very well written poem!  I find it very inspirational.. Great job, Colin! I love the way you write, btw. |
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 15:43:32 GMT -2
Yes thank you. Mom doesn't know what its about. But she cried when read to her
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Post by Rikki Jo on May 17, 2014 15:55:36 GMT -2
Yes thank you. Mom doesn't know what its about. But she cried when read to her Which poem are you talking about? |
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 15:56:39 GMT -2
Yes thank you. Mom doesn't know what its about. But she cried when read to her Which poem are you talking about? The Dylan poem |
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Post by Rikki Jo on May 17, 2014 16:04:47 GMT -2
Which poem are you talking about? The Dylan poem Oh ok.. Yeah, I think it's quite sentimental too. |
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 16:23:37 GMT -2
She also dosent need 2 know the full story. Sometimes a little mystery works.
People can look at it in slightly different ways. My version is dylan being himself and not being ashamed of himself. Hes Dylan a grown man. Not Zack, a disney goody two shoes pawn
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Post by Rikki Jo on May 17, 2014 17:11:57 GMT -2
She also dosent need 2 know the full story. Sometimes a little mystery works. People can look at it in slightly different ways. My version is dylan being himself and not being ashamed of himself. Hes Dylan a grown man. Not Zack, a disney goody two shoes pawn Yeah, everyone should realize that Dylan is just being Dylan, and he's a grown man now. And he definitely knows that he has no reason to be ashamed of himself. Both Dylan and Cole really make a wonderful example of courageously being yourself, not caring about what other people say about you, and having the right to defend yourself. |
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Post by Deleted on May 17, 2014 20:31:46 GMT -2
She also dosent need 2 know the full story. Sometimes a little mystery works. People can look at it in slightly different ways. My version is dylan being himself and not being ashamed of himself. Hes Dylan a grown man. Not Zack, a disney goody two shoes pawn Yeah, everyone should realize that Dylan is just being Dylan, and he's a grown man now. And he definitely knows that he has no reason to be ashamed of himself. Both Dylan and Cole really make a wonderful example of courageously being yourself, not caring about what other people say about you, and having the right to defend yourself. And making the best out of an uncomfortable situation. He wasn't intending on being exposed, but wasn't going to apologize. He was unhappy with the situation, but proud of his body (which in the US isn't very common). |
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Post by Rikki Jo on May 17, 2014 22:09:51 GMT -2
Yeah, everyone should realize that Dylan is just being Dylan, and he's a grown man now. And he definitely knows that he has no reason to be ashamed of himself. Both Dylan and Cole really make a wonderful example of courageously being yourself, not caring about what other people say about you, and having the right to defend yourself. And making the best out of an uncomfortable situation. He wasn't intending on being exposed, but wasn't going to apologize. He was unhappy with the situation, but proud of his body (which in the US isn't very common). ~ Spot on! Right, he's proud of his body but didn't expect an incident like that to happen. I liked how he was honest and handled the situation. |
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2014 3:25:12 GMT -2
Sweet Pride You've been called scandalous Betrayed by a loved one Recieved praise and critisism. Well what do they know? What do they really know? Do they? Can they? No they don't. Though they should. We're told to be ashamed of such things. A sight as breathtaking as yourself has no reason to. Do they not appreciate beauty?! If they did, the world would be a better place. They know nothing. Nothing at all. You are an inspiration. A rolemodel to us all. You feel no shame. Love what you are. Proud and free. Free from the chains of society. Breaking the mold of what people expect you to be. That body. That beautiful body. A proud free body. You've had my respect already, now it's permanent. Teach me to be more proud. Teach me to accept myself. Please. I beg of you. Show me the way. Help me escape. Help me free myself. That smoothness. Those beauty marks. That errection. The way you grab yourself. If only I could have you. If only I could be like you. Wish all of us could be more like you. Wow dude, this is really nice. Your words are pretty powerful. I really feel what you're saying. Especially when you say, "help me escape, help me be free." That sound likes it's right from the heart. Really love this part, btw. Inspiring to us all buddy. They know nothing. Nothing at all. You are an inspiration. A rolemodel to us all.
You feel no shame. Love what you are. Proud and free. Free from the chains of society.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 1, 2014 22:38:08 GMT -2
Lizard
She's my hero
My idol and saint
After a long day of lovin' she'd come home
Soak in her tub
Dress me in her clothes and pretty me up.
We'd go out and get things for free
Shoplifting items just her and me.
At work she'd whore around, cause that's really her job
Give me a beating, then teach me to roll condoms on
I wanna grow up to be just the same
Being her son don't mean a thing.
Taking her place, I set out on my own
Earning her love before coming home.
And once home, she's no longer there
Took off without a care.
Reality kicks in, and I grow up fast
Becoming a woman didn't last.
Nothing is the same back home
Without her love feel so alone.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 29, 2014 5:34:01 GMT -2
Feeling Lonesome
Has anyone felt a love for someone that you know is impossible?
As much as I love you guys, there's still this sense of lonliness.
Your all more than just internet friends, but there's no way to see
or feel you guys.
It's not that I'm greedy, just need a little more. I need someone to actually hold me.
The fact remains...sometimes feel like the most lonliest boy in the world.
It's not exactly sad, it's just how it is. But it still isn't pleasant.
There are those I love I'll never tell. It's just not a possibility. So why make it more tragic right?
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Post by Rikki Jo on Jul 29, 2014 6:59:20 GMT -2
Feeling Lonesome Has anyone felt a love for someone that you know is impossible? As much as I love you guys, there's still this sense of lonliness. Your all more than just internet friends, but there's no way to see or feel you guys. It's not that I'm greedy, just need a little more. I need someone to actually hold me. The fact remains...sometimes feel like the most lonliest boy in the world. It's not exactly sad, it's just how it is. But it still isn't pleasant. There are those I love I'll never tell. It's just not a possibility. So why make it more tragic right? Colin, I feel the same way.. I don't have any local friends, and that makes me feel lonely and depressed. I hardly talk to anyone in real life due to being severely shy; I have a huge fear of being judged, rejected and treated harshly, which I used to go through a lot when I was younger. It takes me a while to warm up to people. But I do always feel the need for someone to actually hold me, comfort me, and give me affection. I'd like you to know that I think about you all the time, online and off. And I wish I could actually be there with you, totally keeping you company. Please remember that I'll always be here for you whenever you need anything.  |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2014 20:07:02 GMT -2
Why I Became A Pagan
Growing up I was raised a catholic. Recieved communion and learned the Ten Commandments. Over the past few years, I've wondered if there is God. Wondered if I believe in God.
Currently I do, but with a different perception. God is merely a word (and there are many). While I respect those who believe, the Christian concept no longer works for me. It never really resonated with my personality.
I've always loved mother nature, how everthing has a soul. Even the most insignificant thing such as a rock has a purpose in life. We're all connected. Have been told I have physic abilities, which may explain my connection and love of cats (which are familiars).
This being said, I still believe in Jesus. Maybe not as the son of God, but as a brilliant man.
Still haven't figured shit out, but maybe with the right guidence and love of friends I'll get to where I'm supposed to be. There many things about being a witch I need to learn, and could use some help.
Much love, and blessed be!
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I find it very inspirational.. Great job, Colin! 